I agree! Often my writing is too short: I know what I mean in my head, but the ideas don't translate to the words on the page. My friend gave me great advice:

I agree! Often my writing is too short: I know what I mean in my head, but the ideas don't translate to the words on the page. My friend gave me great advice: he asked "hey can you unpack that for me?" -- my text was too concise and not clear.