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McDonald's is very often a love or hate divide as you can already see from some of the comments here. You could prevent that distraction by using a generic food
by tchaffee 7y ago
McDonald's is very often a love or hate divide as you can already see from some of the comments here. You could prevent that distraction by using a generic food takeout store and ask people to imagine their favorite. The article will resonate with a larger audience, and the comments will be higher quality.
- ljvmiranda 7y agoHi author here, definitely didn't intend and expected that! I'm mostly drawing from my own experience and that insight while ordering food inside Mcdo.
- tchaffee 7y agoAs someone who also does technical writing, I agree you should draw from your own experience. It can be hard to find the right analogy. If the subject of the analogy is enough of a hot topic, it will get attention itself. As you can see, you've got comments in here even talking about how McDonald's isn't faster with their new system, or how they could have better optimized for customers, links to articles about McDonald's business model etc. Some of the earlier negative comments about McDonald's were deleted - probably due to downvotes. Since my advice to other writers was sincere and I believe useful, I'm keeping my comment. For sure I'm not expecting you to change your article. Just hoping that my tip might help you with future technical writing. If not, no worries.