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You left out everything that makes the story human and resonate with the reader.
by switchstance 6y ago
You left out everything that makes the story human and resonate with the reader.
- kabacha 6y agoThat's your opinion and that's not the point of a tldr. I read the whole article and it's 2/3rds filler — including how many square meters the house had and tv brands they used. It's just bad writing.