I didn't keep reading. I found your paragraph structure difficult to want to follow. You give one line. This draws you in.. 3 then 4 sentences which explains

I didn't keep reading. I found your paragraph structure difficult to want to follow. You give one line. This draws you in.. 3 then 4 sentences which explains your point and I decide to stop reading. Your third paragraph was bigger than all of the others combined. Your fourth is small followed by a bigger last paragraph. Beef up 2 that is where you make your key point. Keep the last line short.