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Thanks, I put so much text to try to explain the idea and credentials as to not seem like one of "You give me money and I give you this awesome secret to saving

Thanks, I put so much text to try to explain the idea and credentials as to not seem like one of "You give me money and I give you this awesome secret to saving and becoming a millionaire in a year" but I agree it is a bit too much.

petervandijck 16y ago
This pretty much sums it up: "Tell us where you want to go and experienced travelers will provide you with info you cannot find on search websites." You can probably rewrite a lot of that homepage, make it shorter and convert better. I like the "Got an awesome deal? we'll find you a better one for $10" approach. ie: encourage people to find the best deal they can find on expedia etc, then get them a better deal. One way of doing it would be to take that approach and build your homepage around that (instead of just making it a sentence in between other sentences). I would imagine that would convert very well.
petervandijck 16y ago
Also, you need an example of a question and answer on that homepage. I want to see what I'd get.