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I'm LOVING the aesthetic you're putting off with the web design. It's pretty overwhelming at first, though. I'd put a tag line or something right on the home pa
by wmeredith 18y ago
I'm LOVING the aesthetic you're putting off with the web design. It's pretty overwhelming at first, though. I'd put a tag line or something right on the home page that's basically your 10 second pitch. Something like, "A better way to communicate and with other gamers." It'll give people an entry point. I looked at the site for about 45 seconds before finding and clicking on the "about" tab. Had I not come from this Hacker news thread, I may likely have just moved on after 44... or 10.
I'd also tone down the apologetic tone in the about section. There's nothing worse than starting a story by telling people you're a bad story teller.
I like it, good luck.