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Given how muddled this essay it, it appears that whatever this author is talking about has not improved his own cognitive toolkit to the point where he is able
by andrewprock 7y ago
Given how muddled this essay it, it appears that whatever this author is talking about has not improved his own cognitive toolkit to the point where he is able to express his thoughts clearly.
- itsArtur 7y agoI am not a native english speaker and it was really difficult for me to read this essay and understand its purpose. Is this writing style considered "good"?
- andrewprock 7y agoIn my experience, this writing style is indicative of the author speaking to an ongoing conversation where people are writing about the topic in many places. As a stand-alone essay, this is very bad. As a contribution to a conversation, as you might see in an online forum, this probably makes more sense.
- argonaut 7y agoAs a native speaker, I found the essay to be long-winded and over-complicated. It uses twice as many words as it needs to convey the same point.