Some feedback: The video is a bit slow-paced, and the music is really annoying. Overall, it feels like a 1992 commercial. How to improve it? More dynamic voic

Some feedback: The video is a bit slow-paced, and the music is really annoying. Overall, it feels like a 1992 commercial. How to improve it? More dynamic voice, get quicker to the point, change music (or no music at all) The most important piece of information here is "scan your receipts with your iphone" (we'll imagine the rest), and this information only comes at the 31st second. It should be in the first 5 seconds.