I also really liked that scene you're talking about. Not sure you think it's terrible though, I really liked it all the way through. For people that don't kno

I also really liked that scene you're talking about. Not sure you think it's terrible though, I really liked it all the way through. For people that don't know about it, it started off as a blog post on less wrong so the first chapter or so is a little different in style. If you want to see if you'd like it I suggest people read Chapter 10 (the sorting hat chapter) and if that appeals to you to go back and start from the beginning.