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It's almost certainly a translation from Japanese. The "not only...but also..." pattern is giveaway, plus the rather long sentence stitched together with "while
by laurieg 7y ago
It's almost certainly a translation from Japanese. The "not only...but also..." pattern is giveaway, plus the rather long sentence stitched together with "while". It can be really hard to force Japanese into natural sounding English.
- rtpg 7y agoFor the curious the original text > ソニーエレクトロニクス株式会社の設立により、EP&S傘下の事業間の一体運営をさらに推進し、組織・人材の最適化、既存事業の競争力強化、そして新規事業の創出と成長を図ります。 I mean it's still boilerplate business reasons but it doesn't feel as much of a word salad