The level of detail in this is pretty nice. But I also feel like it's too much- some of the comments here are poking holes in the write-up. Is there a mis-trans

The level of detail in this is pretty nice. But I also feel like it's too much- some of the comments here are poking holes in the write-up. Is there a mis-translation from geek-speak to lay-speak (maybe due to the short turnaround)? Is it better to not mention some of these details at all?