Most people aren't going to want to sign-up without knowing more. The intro sentence doesn't do enough. You need to demonstrate the purpose of the product and t

Most people aren't going to want to sign-up without knowing more. The intro sentence doesn't do enough. You need to demonstrate the purpose of the product and the value proposition to the customer (i.e. your users). No one is going to contribute their e-mail and their time for free. No one does anything for free, really. I have no idea what I'm getting into by signing up. Make it more clear and I'd be tempted!