I think it is just weak writing, the story seems to be about new technology and how we interact with it, which is fair TechCrunch fodder. However the opening se

I think it is just weak writing, the story seems to be about new technology and how we interact with it, which is fair TechCrunch fodder. However the opening sentences provide no hook and no solid message as to what the article is about. On top of that the writing style is something out of a Sunday magazine, rambling, relaxed and undirected. Though it was posted on Sunday so . . .