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The article is pretty short and straightforward. Can you name a specific thing that's wrong with it?
by daveFNbuck 7y ago
The article is pretty short and straightforward. Can you name a specific thing that's wrong with it?
- johannes1234321 7y agoAnd even better: You can click the "Edit" button and improve it!
- Rapzid 7y agoSure, there are too many ideas in the second/last paragraph.
- daveFNbuck 7y agoSo when you say there's quite a bit wrong, you don't mean that any of the content is inaccurate?