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I've received the correction: Planning for learning will be non-stop, as your knowledge (not information) is manageable. Perhaps now the sentence is understanda
by SunghoYahng 7y ago
I've received the correction:
Planning for learning will be non-stop, as your knowledge (not information) is manageable.
Perhaps now the sentence is understandable.
- yodon 7y agoIt's not so much that that one sentence was a problem, it's that all the text is hard to read and understand. Marketing software is incredibly hard, commonly much harder than developing it. You might consider launching your software first in your first language where it will be easiest for you to both write about and assess others writing about your software.
- SunghoYahng 7y agoThanks for the advice. I did not notice that it's that terrible level. I'll get this corrected overall.
- sol_invictus 7y agoHello. It's not terrible; I think most of it makes sense but it is a bit hard to read at times. Maybe a proof reader could help make it less heavy (i.e. more simple english.) There's quite a lot of content on the front page and a modern users attention span is quite short. HN wants to make everything seem and feel exactly the same but I personally like the flow of words and information - you can tell you've invested yourself into the software. Will give this a spin.
- SunghoYahng 7y agoOkay. I understand now that the problem is to reduce the amount of complexity. And thank you for the compliment!