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"Planning for your learning will be relentless as your knowledge (not information) will be manageable" I think a proof reader might be valuable for your site,
by CtrlAltEngage 7y ago
"Planning for your learning will be relentless as your knowledge (not information) will be manageable"
I think a proof reader might be valuable for your site, I've no idea what the above sentence, and several like it, really says.
- SunghoYahng 7y agoThank you so much for your suggestion; I didn't notice it. As you can see, I'm not a native English speaker. I'll make some corrections to the content on the landing page.
- SunghoYahng 7y agoI've received the correction: Planning for learning will be non-stop, as your knowledge (not information) is manageable. Perhaps now the sentence is understandable.
- yodon 7y agoIt's not so much that that one sentence was a problem, it's that all the text is hard to read and understand. Marketing software is incredibly hard, commonly much harder than developing it. You might consider launching your software first in your first language where it will be easiest for you to both write about and assess others writing about your software.
- SunghoYahng 7y agoThanks for the advice. I did not notice that it's that terrible level. I'll get this corrected overall.
- sol_invictus 7y agoHello. It's not terrible; I think most of it makes sense but it is a bit hard to read at times. Maybe a proof reader could help make it less heavy (i.e. more simple english.) There's quite a lot of content on the front page and a modern users attention span is quite short. HN wants to make everything seem and feel exactly the same but I personally like the flow of words and information - you can tell you've invested yourself into the software. Will give this a spin.
- SunghoYahng 7y agoOkay. I understand now that the problem is to reduce the amount of complexity. And thank you for the compliment!