I wasn't going into this with the intention of critiquing it, but, style-wise, this is a pretty difficult read for me. It seems extremely long, very repetitive,

I wasn't going into this with the intention of critiquing it, but, style-wise, this is a pretty difficult read for me. It seems extremely long, very repetitive, takes ages to get to the actual point, and then repeats the point over and over with little added. I think it would come across much clearer, with nothing lost, if you were to remove 80% of the paragraphs. If this is intended as an intro post for this website, I suspect a lot of people are going to start reading and stop well before the end, and not use the website again. Others may feel differently; this is just one data point. I agree with the message, but to me it just felt like a tortuous route to get to it.