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How to escape the greatest serial killer of startup founders
- pedalpete 7y agoNice write up about what you are looking to accomplish Jose. I have such an allergic reaction to the term "entrepreneur", I can't say I like the term "intropreneur" much better, but I get that you want something people can key off of. A quick grammatical fix, your first bullet at the bottom of the page says "You are plenty of good intentions. " should be "You have..." The rest are fine. All the best.
- joserodes 7y agoHi there. Thanks for your attention, your kind comment, and your correction —we already fixed it.
- meowface 7y agoI wasn't going into this with the intention of critiquing it, but, style-wise, this is a pretty difficult read for me. It seems extremely long, very repetitive, takes ages to get to the actual point, and then repeats the point over and over with little added. I think it would come across much clearer, with nothing lost, if you were to remove 80% of the paragraphs. If this is intended as an intro post for this website, I suspect a lot of people are going to start reading and stop well before the end, and not use the website again. Others may feel differently; this is just one data point. I agree with the message, but to me it just felt like a tortuous route to get to it.
- joserodes 7y agoHi there. I appreciate the trouble you've taken to read our article and give your opinion on it. I'm sorry you found it so tedious. I take note of your suggestions. Still, I'm glad that at least you can understand the message and even more that you agree with it. We will try to improve in the future.