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IMO all copy should be thrown away as it's aimed for non-technical users. So cut this technical buzzwords and write like for kids. ;)

• lukevp 7y ago
  Agreed. Something like: “using our Accelerator technology, we take care of optimizing your website with industry-best practices. Your users get fast page speeds, and you can stop worrying and get back to building sites.” Then have a graph of page load times without acceleration and with acceleration and a link for more info for the curious.
  • cvrajeesh 7y ago
    agreed, contents need to be improved. I'm a solo founder working on a shoestring budget. Planning to raise funds and invest more time on improving contents
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  • Filligree 7y ago
    A buzzword bingo like that would instantly turn me off, but perhaps that doesn't matter. I admit I'm not in the target market.
    • StavrosK 7y ago
      To be fair, it wasn't that buzzwordy, it's just the "Accelerator technology" thing that biased me. The rest of the sentence was fine, maybe that's what happened for you too.
  • StavrosK 7y ago
    https://imgz.org/?v=c https://imgz.org/?v=c