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I don't know anything about the author, but it read just fine for me. Someone else criticized the style of the writing, but I found that it was like telling a s
by rcfox 7y ago
I don't know anything about the author, but it read just fine for me. Someone else criticized the style of the writing, but I found that it was like telling a story in the way you would naturally do it face to face.
I would invite anyone who is confused about a part of the story to ask for clarification on jargon or situations.