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The notes in an 1885 edition say "As printed the [hear/Mariner] rhyme is defective. In the original edition the spelling is Marinere wherever the word occurs."
by yesenadam 7y ago
The notes in an 1885 edition say
"As printed the [hear/Mariner] rhyme is defective. In the original edition the spelling is Marinere wherever the word occurs."[0]
An archaism I suppose, like eftsoons etc. And about
How loudly his sweet voice he rears!
He loves to talk with marineres
That come from a far countree.
it says "In the early editions this is always spelt, as here,
with an added e ; when the poem was revised the e was dropped, except in this place, where it is retained on account of the rhyme."
And the -ear sound is better for rhyming! e.g.
Alas! (thought I, and my heart beat loud)
How fast she nears and nears!
Are those her sails that glance in the Sun,
Like restless gossameres?
Also, re the there/are/prayer rhyme
What loud uproar bursts from that door!
The wedding-guests are there:
But in the garden-bower the bride
And bride-maids singing are:
And hark the little vesper bell,
Which biddeth me to prayer!
"A great many English-speaking people incorrectly pronounce 'are' like 'air,' and [this rhyme], viewed in connection with the one before us,
[Sometimes all little birds that are,
How they seemed to fill the sea and air]
would seem to indicate that this was Coleridge's pronunciation."
Finally,
"The pronunciation of [Coleridge] is indicated by Coleridge himself in the following couplet :
Could you stand upon Skiddaw, you would not from its whole ridge
See a man who so loves you as your fond S. T. Coleridge."
[0] https://archive.org/stream/coleridgesancient00cole/coleridgesancient00cole_djvu.txt https://archive.org/stream/coleridgesancient00cole/coleridge...
- Jaruzel 7y agoA good explanation, thank you!
- StrictDabbler 7y agoThese are very useful notes. It doesn't look like they address this one: FIRST VOICE But why drives on that ship so fast, Without or wave or wind?' SECOND VOICE 'The air is cut away before, And closes from behind. When I was memorizing this poem with my friends in high-school this was a high point. All as one, we'd say "And closes from BEE-HIHND," rhyming it with "wind" and then breaking up in gales of laughter.
- yesenadam 7y agoWell, the lines With sloping masts and dipping prow, As who pursued with yell and blow have the notes "prow, the Classical equivalent of the Teutonic bow, rimes with blow only to the eye. Such are called printers' rhymes." Did you manage to memorize it?? It's long! I chose Kubla Khan, more sensibly. About the spelling rime he says "Rime. — This word has during the last three centuries been usually but improperly spelt rhyme, probably through confusion with rhythm" which seems right e.g. https://www.etymonline.com/word/rhyme https://www.etymonline.com/word/rhyme