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Impressive technical article packed with facts, very good! Only thing is perhaps the tone is just a tad bit too seo-ish or how you would put it. Point in case,
by aliswe 7y ago
Impressive technical article packed with facts, very good! Only thing is perhaps the tone is just a tad bit too seo-ish or how you would put it. Point in case, "Curcumin has received worldwide attention for its multiple health benefits"... The parts in the article are stellar, I just find something in my heart regarding how it binds it all together.
If that can be adjusted, I'd definitely see this being published in eg. NYT.
- Shaya_writes 7y agoThank you so much for your feedback. I have started publishing recently and I am learning a lot of new ways of writing and marketing, hence the SEO-ish tone. But you are right, my main aim is to share knowledge.