I checked out the page BEFORE reading your description, so this is my impression as a normal web user. Sorry, but it's kind of brutal. I'm trying to be honest.

I checked out the page BEFORE reading your description, so this is my impression as a normal web user. Sorry, but it's kind of brutal. I'm trying to be honest. First thoughts: After viewing the page for about 20 seconds, I have no idea what it is. If I were a normal user, I'd be gone by now. Seconds thoughts: Now that I've read all the boxes around the page, I get that it's for managing a band. Took way too long to figure that out. The 6 boxes need to be shrunk down into one "sound bite" to describe what the site is. You don't have to tell your users all your feature on the front page - that's what a "more info" link is for. Also - there's a SIGNUP UP NOW, below that there is an Enter, and below that is another Enter. Over on the bottom left is another Enter with a smiley face. Not sure what to do first. Decided to pretend I'm a band: Clicking on Band starts a video tutorial. Wasn't expecting that. Video tutorial goes by pretty fast. How do I stop this video? The "Enter" button at the bottom of the page is apparently a free text field that does nothing. Decided to sign up: Filled out the fields. Clicked Continue. Took me back to the form and told me the user was not found. At this point, I'm done. In general: Too much going on for a simple landing page. The idea of a landing page is to convert casual surfers into signing up. I never saw the Terms of Service anywhere.