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Here's a 2560x1600 screenshot for you to review since you only see 1280x800: http://d.pr/WxxM http://d.pr/WxxM There's a lot of things wrong with this landing

by us 16y ago

Here's a 2560x1600 screenshot for you to review since you only see 1280x800: http://d.pr/WxxM http://d.pr/WxxM There's a lot of things wrong with this landing page so take what I have to say as best as you can without getting offended. Just want to be objective. I can't stand the design. It's horrible. There are so many things wrong with it that listing things that are okay would probably be a shorter list. There is no strong objective on this page. I have to spend time scanning around to try and figure out what it is you do and even then, the message isn't concise. I hate that I have to click "more" to read the rest. Perhaps this works well on a 1280x800 but it shouldn't be so on my screen. I also don't like that all the info is so spread out. I also dislike the fact that when I click on one of the play buttons, it SLOWLY loads up what looks like powerpoint version web 0.5 and that I have to wait for stuff to crawl across the screen to be able to read it. I read extremely fast. Not having all the text there ready to go is annoying. I'm sure I could continue to list a few more things but I hope this helps.

TimothyBurgess 16y ago
OH WOW LOL thanks for the screenshot that looks hilarious! Nothing at all like the lower resolutions. I wonder how many people browse at super high resolutions though. Either way I'll definitely figure out a way to satisfy all resolutions. I was just trying to go for something atypical... not a big fan of the cookie cutter startup landing pages I see all over the place... but I guess there's a good reason they all look similar. As for the objective, this app does quite a bit and it's all fairly specific so it's hard to narrow it down to a single concise tagline. I've tried to highlight the main idea though in a number of places... which is basically to make the lives of touring bands/management easier. How would you suggest I let people know what all the app can do (it does a lot!!!) as concisely as possible? As for the presentation, it all goes by pretty fast on my resolution. I'd guess the reason it seems like such a crawl is because your resolution is so high. I'll figure out a fix for this as well. This is how it looks on my resolution: http://i.imgur.com/XmpRl.jpg http://i.imgur.com/XmpRl.jpg

by us 16y ago

TimothyBurgess 16y ago

OH WOW LOL thanks for the screenshot that looks hilarious! Nothing at all like the lower resolutions. I wonder how many people browse at super high resolutions though. Either way I'll definitely figure out a way to satisfy all resolutions. I was just trying to go for something atypical... not a big fan of the cookie cutter startup landing pages I see all over the place... but I guess there's a good reason they all look similar. As for the objective, this app does quite a bit and it's all fairly specific so it's hard to narrow it down to a single concise tagline. I've tried to highlight the main idea though in a number of places... which is basically to make the lives of touring bands/management easier. How would you suggest I let people know what all the app can do (it does a lot!!!) as concisely as possible? As for the presentation, it all goes by pretty fast on my resolution. I'd guess the reason it seems like such a crawl is because your resolution is so high. I'll figure out a fix for this as well. This is how it looks on my resolution: http://i.imgur.com/XmpRl.jpg http://i.imgur.com/XmpRl.jpg