This is a good example of why technical people need to learn how to write. I made it through that entire paper, looking at all the diagrams, and nowhere could

This is a good example of why technical people need to learn how to write. I made it through that entire paper, looking at all the diagrams, and nowhere could I find an answer to whether the system they're proposing is supposed to beam power from space to the ground, or from the ground up into space. That's something they need to put in the first paragraph. "The Big Confusing Acronym (BCM) project is a proposal to do [seven word description of what your thing does]." Make sure your reader is on the same page, Then tell him about your progress in putting together a working committee and how many MW you'll generate in phase 2.