The book is trying really hard to be the next Hitchhiker's Guide to The Galaxy. Trying a bit too hard at times. I honestly think another few manuscript revisi

The book is trying really hard to be the next Hitchhiker's Guide to The Galaxy. Trying a bit too hard at times. I honestly think another few manuscript revisions, and a pass or two from a brutal editor, and it might have ended up there. But as it is.. parts of the book just aren't good. Which is sad because some parts are great!