This would be better if it was about his experience from the past 6 years... whatever he's been doing definitely works. Instead it's ideas about what he wants

This would be better if it was about his experience from the past 6 years... whatever he's been doing definitely works. Instead it's ideas about what he wants to try in the future. In fairness, those ideas sound great... but this is more like an advisory notice to his existing clients about how things might change.