The title comes from the original title and two portions of a sentence in the intro. I changed the ordering of those portions to make it work within the length

The title comes from the original title and two portions of a sentence in the intro. I changed the ordering of those portions to make it work within the length requirements. Is that OK? I'm relatively new here, and know I shouldn't edit titles much, but I'm unsure how much is too much. Note: The original title is "ripgrep code review" and I added on a modification of the sentence "This post attempts to target those intermediate-level-Rustaceans (like me), by looking at the ripgrep crate by Andrew Gallant, a great example of good Rust."