> Overall, too breezy and conversational. Objective should be more like "To become a Python or C software developer in [field of interest or company]." There's

> Overall, too breezy and conversational. Objective should be more like "To become a Python or C software developer in [field of interest or company]." There's a lot of "I'm personable and a hard worker" fluff. Thanks a lot. This the kind of honest feedback that is really hard to get from rereading it over and over again myself :). Your second paragraph is very valuable as well, and it will receive heavy consideration in the next iteration of my resumé. The point about tightening is good. I was trying to fit in a bit more writing since I consider that one of my skills, but in the process I forgot the most important principle: "Omit needless words."