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Working on it! which headline or sentence irritated you the most?
by Tom_Dau 7y ago
Working on it! which headline or sentence irritated you the most?
- gravitas 7y agoI don't tend to think in that manner, more that it's pervasive enough (in the FAQ, the About, etc. - not just one page) that it "got to me" after awhile of reading. Small, subtle cuts instead of one large cut if you will in pronoun and article usage, and in some case conjugations are wrong. Random example: > Its quite simple. If you realize that DueFocus isn’t for you, just cancel subscription before your next billing period. This date is listed on your billing page. ...maybe to: "If you realize that DueFocus isn’t for you, simply cancel your subscription before the next billing period listed on your billing page." I am not an English professional, just a random guy. :)
- Tom_Dau 7y agoThanks for your help and useful feedback! Waiting for your feedback about DueFocus app :)