The point of a resume is to generate sufficient interest to get talking, ideally an interview but even a screening phone call is better than being ignored. For

The point of a resume is to generate sufficient interest to get talking, ideally an interview but even a screening phone call is better than being ignored. For someone who's interest is in working in design and development this is a very distinctive marketing document. Yes it could be improved, but the fact that it is attracting attention means it worked.