The lowest hanging fruit article I can dig up from memory is this: https://www.eff.org/deeplinks/2016/01/eff-pries-more-transparency-zero-days-governments-grasp

The lowest hanging fruit article I can dig up from memory is this: https://www.eff.org/deeplinks/2016/01/eff-pries-more-transparency-zero-days-governments-grasp https://www.eff.org/deeplinks/2016/01/eff-pries-more-transpa... The title and first paragraph set an unnecessary tone. There are ways to say the same thing which aren't immediately off-putting to those not "on your side" yet.