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You can also use "I". Trying to avoid pronouns can make it sound like a high school lab report with excessive passive voice (e.g. "The baking soda was mixed wit
by singron 7y ago
You can also use "I". Trying to avoid pronouns can make it sound like a high school lab report with excessive passive voice (e.g. "The baking soda was mixed with the vinegar" vs. "I mixed the baking soda with the vinegar").
In this example, I might say "This seems very complicated to me. Would a simpler model work?". If I had something simpler in mind specifically I would suggest it.