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it's hard to make a story about you making money compelling unless you have something to share that can help others get there too. there's not too much of that
by johnwheeler 7y ago
it's hard to make a story about you making money compelling unless you have something to share that can help others get there too. there's not too much of that here (and i'm not sure there could be in this case)
- huntermonk 7y agoThat's a good point - I added a small conclusion which possibly helps.