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Sorry if it spoilt the experience. I will try to pay more attention next time. Thanks for pointing it out. :)
by AshMokhberi 16y ago
Sorry if it spoilt the experience. I will try to pay more attention next time.
Thanks for pointing it out. :)
- mcantor 16y agoI enjoyed this writeup too, but was also distracted by the errors. I do a lot of proofreading; I'd be happy to send you a list of editorial corrections if you feel like it is worth the time.
- BrandonM 16y agoThe main thing was the frequent use of "where" in place of "were." Another thing that jumped out at me was the omitted words in the introduction. If you'd like me to go back and proofread, I'd be happy to. Thanks for an insightful article.
- AshMokhberi 16y agoThank you very much for offering. I would really appreciate it, if it will not consume too much of your time. You can mail me at, me[at] ashmokhberi [dot] com Thanks very much in advance.
- BrandonM 16y agoSent.