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I hope to find constructive criticism, ie. it's terrible because of this and that and I would improve it like this and that.
by dordoka 7y ago
I hope to find constructive criticism, ie. it's terrible because of this and that and I would improve it like this and that.
- tempodox 7y agoMy improvement would be to leave out the condescending comics and describe roles and interactions in a way that's appropriate for adults.
- matsemann 7y agoHow is this inappropriate for adults? You are free not to like it, but you shouldn't gatekeep others.