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This would be a lot easier to digest with some line breaks separating paragraphs and capitalizing the first letter of each sentence. The paragraphs would help
by jolmg 7y ago
This would be a lot easier to digest with some line breaks separating paragraphs and capitalizing the first letter of each sentence.
The paragraphs would help in keeping track of which line I'm on, because it would give more shape to the text. The capitalizing would help in scanning for the beginning of sentences in order to search for the main ideas presented here more quickly, and then go back to fill in the details.
Regarding why I would scan, it's because there seems to be a fair amount of filler. For example the beginning:
> gonna take a wild guess at this coz yeah it's a good question, but basically my guess is
contributes nothing to the idea you're trying to present. You could literally just cut that out and you wouldn't lose content.
I'm just trying to advise. You can disregard me if you want.