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Great idea! I see this getting a lot of traction. I would work a bit more on the website though. I don't think is perfectly clear what the objective is. It lo
by fabiandesimone 16y ago
Great idea! I see this getting a lot of traction.
I would work a bit more on the website though. I don't think is perfectly clear what the objective is.
It looks like you want to accomplish two main things:
1. Get users to download the app
2. Get business owners to request more info.
Number 1 seems clear enough, but #2 I think is a bit shaky. I think business owners deserved a dedicated page explaining the benefits of why would they want to use Punchd.
The idea of the letter to request more info is great and you seem to know your fare share of Direct Response marketing :). However, the contact form is quite unfamiliar. Idea: work on the border to make it look more like an envelope (maybe a stamp or whatever)
Congrats on launching!
If you need any more tips drop me a line. Email is in my profile :)