Yeah, this introduction/launch needs a lot of work. I've read over the first paragraph or two and all I see is buzzwords: "turn-key", "orchestration", "cloud",

Yeah, this introduction/launch needs a lot of work. I've read over the first paragraph or two and all I see is buzzwords: "turn-key", "orchestration", "cloud", etc... If you can't explain your value proposition simply and concisely so anyone that is not familiar with your product ecosystem can understand, you have a big problem in your hands. This product seems like a simple scheduling tool, but your marketing jargon fluff piece says otherwise.