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> In the real world, watching our action would be akin to constant dissociation. Instead, we feel things, we say things to ourselves, and eventually we come upo
by geoka9 7y ago
> In the real world, watching our action would be akin to constant dissociation. Instead, we feel things, we say things to ourselves, and eventually we come upon subject matter and then to the scenes.
I think that's why writing "I felt scared" is usually fine. But 'show, don't tell' is more about avoiding things like "she felt scared".
- hnick 7y agoI'm always reminded of Futurama. "You can't just have your characters announce how they feel! That makes me feel angry!"