I'm starting something and your service could be useful but your website don't feel "corporate" or "serious" to me. Maybe it's the image you want to promote but

I'm starting something and your service could be useful but your website don't feel "corporate" or "serious" to me. Maybe it's the image you want to promote but the "Y not try us" sounds childish. And your big plan called "boss" seems like a joke. Maybe it's because I'm not a native speaker. Also, I don't like time limited trial. What about a free account with maximum 15 or 25sms total? I can take 2 or 3 weeks to try your system at my own pace because I can only work on it during evening and weekends.