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> The author of the post, CTO at Mindright in the Audible building in Newark, was staying with a friend who is a leader of the leadership team of Mindright who
by malux85 7y ago
> The author of the post, CTO at Mindright in the Audible building in Newark, was staying with a friend who is a leader of the leadership team of Mindright who also happens to rent his bedrooms out on AirBnb
It could have been clearer, we don't need all that irrelevant detail. "Staying with a friend" would suffice -
"in the Audible building in Newark" was totally irrelevant