This is taking from one paragraph of the WHY section of my YC App : "In Public Safety, the most important skills are the most difficult to train. It took me a

This is taking from one paragraph of the WHY section of my YC App : "In Public Safety, the most important skills are the most difficult to train. It took me a day to master the hardest rope knot. A critical thinking skill, like patient assessment, where you are interviewing a patient, simultaneously checking vital signs, managing treatment, calculating drug doses, and a dozen other skills, is much more challenging to train on. Why can’t we train on it with the same effectiveness and frequency as tying a simple rope knot? " I like what you mentioned there for critical thinking and maybe that's a word I should use because most people understand that critical thinking is hard to do and even harder to teach. VR That puts First Responders in the most challenging call of their lives, before it happens. (that is more tagline than simple description) As a simple description, building on your example - VR that teaches critical thinking skills by for Public Safety by overwhelming users in simulated chaos. It doesn't exactly SNAP. I think the content is there but needs to be reorganized and maybe culled a little - Trains first responders' critical thinking skills in virtual reality. I'll keep playing with it. If I had more time, I'd write a shorter story.