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Just an fyi, Oxford comma only applies to lists of 3 or more. I think this is just a dangling modifier.

• mikeash 7y ago
  This is a list of three: Whitson, his son, and his girlfriend.
  • ant6n 7y ago
    Girlfriend of the whitson or the his son?
    • mikeash 7y ago
      Beats me!
• deleted 7y ago
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