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Site looks really good. A few minor observations: - Details page: Policosanol is listed in the table as 23mb instead of 23mg. - Blue box around product photo
by aamar 16y ago
Site looks really good. A few minor observations:
- Details page: Policosanol is listed in the table as 23mb instead of 23mg.
- Blue box around product photo is distracting.
- Main body font feels a little too small generally.
- Possibly too many parentheses on Detail and Contact page.
- A few punctuation errors, e.g. "The possibilities are endless and the potential is unlimited." should have a comma before "and" whereas "Buy now, and" lower down should not.
- Front page: I found the "swallow 8 more pills per day" to be confusing. It would be clearer if you listed the # of pills per day that you'd have to swallow using the separately-purchased products and total those up in the table above that pitch.
- Odd that the 110% guarantee is referred to on the Contact page and nowhere else that I can see.
- The chat plugin floats onto an awkward space on the iOS Safari.
Again, terrific job. Good luck with this and the main startup.