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The design looks great; not spammy at all. At a glance, I was confused by the table near the bottom. The large heading says "What does the PAGG stack consist
by Encosia 16y ago
The design looks great; not spammy at all.
At a glance, I was confused by the table near the bottom. The large heading says "What does the PAGG stack consist of?" and the following paragraph is in a low contrast/small font, so I jumped almost directly from the heading to the table. That gave me the impression that the table was describing what you were selling (i.e. 7 bottles for $92 instead of $111), which isn't the intended effect.
An H2 more in line with the rest of the section or a prominent table caption might be a good idea.
Also keep in mind that the largest group of people buying supplements (at least in the US) have aging eyeballs. The size and low-contrast of your P text is going to be challenging for many of them.
- lachyg 16y agoWill execute these suggestions when I wake up tomorrow morning.
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