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This is a very poorly-written story... From the first paragraph of back-slappy happy talk and inside innuendo to the lack of any coherent introduction or even n
by aazaa 7y ago
This is a very poorly-written story... From the first paragraph of back-slappy happy talk and inside innuendo to the lack of any coherent introduction or even narrative.
If I were to re-write it I'd fist begin with why anyone should care. What's at stake?
This style of writing might be fine for those who have already concluded that Facebook is responsible for the election of the president.
For this who haven't, this story doesn't move the ball one inch.
- ec109685 7y agoThe filter bubble that Facebook created where all sorts of misinformation was shared back and forth ad nauseam (I couldn't believe some of the stuff that was shared during the run up between my family members), was far worse than what Cambridge did to the election.