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Random quick first-sight design feedback, how I would do it or at least what I would give a try: "Based on your specifications, I'll personally make you a MVP
by aw3c2 16y ago
Random quick first-sight design feedback, how I would do it or at least what I would give a try:
"Based on your specifications, I'll personally make you a MVP and design it within a couple of days for only $999." looks blotchy in my Opera 11. Get rid of the shadow. Minor.
"Order now" button looks absolutely awful. The text beneath is unreadable on my screen, almost invisible. Major.
Text | Image and in the next line Text | Text. There is a shift to the left and it looks weird. Screenshot has a light blur line around the border.
"— HURRY UP, I'M ACCEPTING ORDERS UNTIL JANUARY 10TH. —" -> "- Quick, I am accepting <other color and link to order>orders until January 10th</> -"
I would also move that line to the bottom. The user reads the page and then he might be interested. Also use a different link color, maybe green like the order button.
"Get a minimal viable product out there for only $999" -> "A Minimal Viable Product\nOnly $999"
Spaces before parenthesis in the "How does it work?" list.
Bottom lists need a different background. Something grey would work. Subtle texture.
- ikonique 16y agoscam-bait?
- hajrice 16y agoThanks for the comment. I agree, the design is horrible, heh, I even put that in the footer indicating that the site was a result of an idea and a couple of hours in photoshop + xhtml/css. That being said, I'm going to shift the design, as I totally agree with your comments as soon as I'm done with monitoring over HackerNews for questions/concerns/etc... :)
- aw3c2 16y agoIf it was horrible I would not have bothered. It looks very good already, just lacking the polish.
- dshankar 16y agoVery good points. Adding to it, you shouldn't use so many fonts. Great idea though!