Perhaps it works for radio, but I agree that it is jarring to read. It also left me wanting for more. Why did the family member refer Fernandez? What is the

Perhaps it works for radio, but I agree that it is jarring to read. It also left me wanting for more. Why did the family member refer Fernandez? What is the psychology behind operating a scam as a business? What motivated Emilio to be a "really good boss" when he was proactively hurting so many other people? I realize that this is a human interest story that isn't intended to address such questions, yet the frequent interruptions seemed to encourage such mental wanderings.