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Feedback: your homepage could do a lot better in selling it. Have a look at 37sigs products. Also, let me quickly see what's on offer without having to scroll d
by petervandijck 16y ago
Feedback: your homepage could do a lot better in selling it. Have a look at 37sigs products. Also, let me quickly see what's on offer without having to scroll down.
The writing can be better too. For example, instead of saying "the unmatched beauty and unrivaled quality of MetalWorks Professional Photoshop styles" (bla!), say something like "I literally shot thousands of pictures, edited thousands of textures, and created thousands of styles." (as you do in your blog post). That gives me a much better feel for how much work this is gonna save me.
- mootothemax 16y agoFeedback: your homepage could do a lot better in selling it. I agree, but I'm not in the market so am not sure if what I'm about to say is constructive criticism or not ;) The first thing I see on the screen is "ULTRA DELUXE" and to my untrained eye those words look pretty cheap and nasty, along the same kind of lines of the 90s-era styles mentioned in the blog post. It's a shame as the more that I click through I can see quality (again though - untrained eye) but the first impression would make me click away without investigating further.
- singer 16y agoAgreed. I'd suggest some A/B testing to see which copy performs best. Check out Google Website Optimizer: http://www.google.com/websiteoptimizer http://www.google.com/websiteoptimizer